Unbelievable

Another tragic story of teen suicide. For those who are writing about deppression I would like to lead you to the story of 15 year old Phoebe Prince of Massachusettes. She was being bullied over and over and over again by classmates or schoolmates in an unstoppable manner. The case is still being investigated but just hearing of such a thing outrages me. As a parent of two children I try to be fully involved in the lives of my children. Not to say that her parents were not but I try to look at lessons that can be learned through others adversities so that I don't suffer something like this. Its remarkable that no one, after such a long period of time this young child was being tormented, stood up and spoke on her behalf or allowed it to get to this point. I appeal to you who are parents to communicate with your children and be involved with all whom they come in contact with. This should never had happened and I can only feel sorry for her and her family. What type of torment and emotional abuse drive such a beautiful and aspiring young child to commit such and act. May she have found the peace she so sought after here on earth. God bless her soul and may He comfort her family during this sorrowful time.

The issues I’ve had throughout the process of writing this paper has been bringing everything together. It’s been like a puzzle. Getting the information, then organizing them. Bringing that information to match my outline, then working off of my outline. Making a draft and citing and referencing properly, so forth and so on. It has been a tedious road but I like to look at it like a puzzle or at least I’ve tried to, lol. I don’t want to look at it as a negative issue but as a positive, learning experience that I will be able to use and do when the time comes. I know that by following the tools and steps I’ll be able get this puzzle done.
I think the comments to my blog for the most part have been inspiring and supportive. I would have hoped to participate in it a bit more so I really can’t put a mark on those that did not post in my blog. I’ve noticed that blogging does give me an opportunity to “jot” down my thoughts and have others review my writing and thoughts even though they may not have known that that is what they were doing. My blogging days are still ahead of me and I hope to incorporate even more people to my blog as my school days move forward. I may not be on as often but I do want to continue my blog.

Peer Review and Feelings, nothing more than Feelings

When looking at a peer peer review I look at their review with an open mind toward their suggestions and corrections that could enhance my writing. I appreciate the insight and advice some may have from their previous writing experience. I would feel awkward if no one had critiqued my writing because I wouldn't know if what I wrote was good or inconsisitent, properly formatted or cited. In Comp I, I was jst as concerned as I am in Comp II but in and through the experience of the course I was fortunate enough for great feedback and direction from my peers and professor. This allowed me to revisit my paper and do some adjustments or edit my paper accordingly. My brief yet helpful experience with peers who have reviewed my writing was advantageous and effective which allowed me to produce a good paper and earn a very high grade for that class.

About time; and Thankful

Share what you have personally been dealing with the last six weeks. What I have been dealing with is time management. I know this is something that has to be tweaked continually. First, the days of seminar change from course to course and the basic routines have to change occasionally. I think I have made the proper adjustments when needed thanks to the support. Secondly, thank God for my wife who not only brings home the bacon but has patiently understood and supported my choice in going back to school. Having previously discussed our options before I actually enrolled in Kaplan, she has maintained her encouraging enthusiasm throughout this time. So for all of you who have that love and support or that inspiration that gives you the ability to continue going forward, I’d like to commend you and ask that you thank that person for their support, even if it’s in a small way. I’ll start by saying thank you to all of you who have extended themselves or have pulled me up or out of the doldrums or have taught me something educationally or of myself. I really am enjoying the experience and relationships I’ve come to have through this medium. Well maybe I have not enjoyed the “schoolwork” always (lol) but I know when all is said and done we will reap the benefits and so will our family and loved ones, of the sacrifice(s) we have made. Continued success to you all. (Can you see the finish line yet)? :o)

Challenges Build Character

If there was one thing about your academic challenges, what would it be? My academic challenges are not many but I’ll start with enthusiasm. I don’t mean that I am not excited or encouraged about school. I love what I’ve learned, what I’m learning, the people I’ve met both teachers and classmates. At times it gets tricky having to take care of other responsibilities and wanting to stick to a schedule. I guess what I’m saying is that time management is a key challenge when having to juggle the personal and the academic. I would like to see more open seminars. I really enjoyed the convenience it allowed me for my math class. But I welcome the challenges because it allows my adaptability as a person and a student to grow.